Too many prepositional phrases
One of the goals1 in the policy statement2 of the workers3 of our company4 is that of the importance5 of fairness6 in the treatment of employees.7 (25 words)
One goal1 in our5 worker’s policy statement2&3 is the importance5 of fair employee treatment.6&7 (14 words)
Our worker’s policy statement1, 2, &5 asks for fair employee treatment.6&7 (9 words)
Acceptable use of prepositional phrases:
1. The parts of a flight coupon are . . .
2. You must know the basics of BARTClient.